A new shopping center is going to open in your town. at present, nobody knows what kind of shops or facilities are going to be provided for customers. what shops and facilities would you like to see made available to the shopping public? give reasons for your answer and make useful suggestions for the shopping center’s management.
It is true that local communities would be happy, if any new shopping center going to open. While new shopping mall are initiating in the local area, we can suggest all of the advantages to the management, which can reach to the customers. This essay will explicated with more information about the merits of the new shopping centers in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, the first suggestion of mine is that, marketing is one of the biggest platform for any kinds of shop. So that, management ca do online ads such as Facebook, WhatsApp's and so on. Secondly, informing to the local customers about home delivery. If shop authority receives order from online, parcel with in 24 hours then shoppers will be happy. Due to this, business can will grow up dramatically. In addition, management can make some banners to distribute local people as how they provide all facilities.
Adding further, there are more advises to be added. The shop authority collect money after delivery. It would be great advantages for local communities, if get any commodities before paying price. Another pivotal aspect is that, more car parking would be a great idea in the shopping center, customers will purchase more products from the shop without any doubt. Last but not the least, ensuring security is an essential for all of the customers. So that, management should be concern about the mall that fully covered by CCTV.
To sum up, we can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of the new shopping center for local people are indeed. Management should take all of the measures to resolve this issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, in addition, such as, it is true, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90774907749 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6254139294 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568265682657 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4727194527 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2352941176 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9411764706 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41176470588 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256514959849 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084685638458 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777206352016 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171660419875 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494769882977 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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