A new shopping centre is going to open in your town. At present, nobody knows what kind of shops or facilities are going to be provided for customers. What shops and facilities would you like to see made available to the shopping public? Give reason for your answer and make useful suggestions for the shopping centre’s management.
Where there are only traditional shops available, opening of a new community for spending will be an exciting opportunity for the residents of our town. Although the local public is not aware of the structure and facilities that will be provided, I would be sharing my suggestions which may be included to enhance the experience of public visiting this neighborhood. This could be made completely as a modern commercial hub with the latest facilities.
With regard to the exterior part, a premise with a multi-story building with green patches of grass and a fountain at the front, few out-door games and rides for children, an underground parking, a 24-hour security system, where guards would be equipped with modern security system, such as scanning machines, fire alarms and other security gadgets at all the check-in points. This could provide a safe browsing experience.
In reference to interior of the building, centralized air conditioning system, lifts, escalators, shops, entertainment spaces such as movie halls, hotels and restaurants, clean toilets, with designed housekeeping staff to ensure hygiene and cleanliness of the building. This could serve as a e-commerce house where one can expect the availability of almost all the items of their requirement, branded as well as non-branded. For example, groceries, clothing, footwear, appliances, fruits and vegetables,
In conclusion, my recommendation to the management is to equip the site with all modern and contemporary amenities, where people can come not only for e-commerce on the contrary for entertainment purposes as well. A separate section for children could attract more people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 291, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the contrary, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47859922179 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11333167331 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626459143969 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.541206573 49.4020404114 218% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 156.444444444 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5555555556 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5555555556 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16258382138 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658077723042 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631194879773 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0935675461989 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739020887667 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.37 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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