New technologies and ways of buying and selling products are transforming the lives of consumers.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Currently, the technologies have made the lives of customers easy and sophisticated than in ancient days. Really this bought up the consumer's life to a level where they can fulfill their needs. In this essay, I would like to discuss briefly about to what extent I agree and disagree with this point of view.
These days buying and selling of products by using modern technologies had made user-friendly for the customers. online shopping of goods has reached to the extent where people are very familiar with this. Even though it has a positive result, in many situations this also has proved to be a negative effect too. There are many online shopping centers like Amazon, Flipkart, Myntra and etc, which transfer all the necessary goods to the doors of the consumers.
Using these modern ways for buying and selling the products people can just order any product of need from their comfort zone. this is also has a drawback of being cheated by this way of shopping, where the customer has the lack of knowledge to use this technology.All the time this advanced technology might not be safer for the customers who use it.
To sum up, according to my view on this aspect is the technologies which have developed by people should not impact negatively on them. Hence online way of shopping should be restricted to a level by the buyers and even sellers because it always does not benefit the customers. To conclude I would like to suggest the people to use these techniques for the right purpose in their lives and enjoy their comfort.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 133, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'consumers'' or 'consumer's'?
Suggestion: consumers'; consumer's
...ancient days. Really this bought up the consumers life to a level where they can fulfill ...
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Line 2, column 113, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Online
...d made user-friendly for the customers. online shopping of goods has reached to the ex...
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Line 4, column 128, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...roduct of need from their comfort zone. this is also has a drawback of being cheated...
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Line 4, column 266, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: All
...ack of knowledge to use this technology.All the time this advanced technology might...
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Line 7, column 137, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...e should not impact negatively on them. Hence online way of shopping should be restri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, hence, if, really, so, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79026217228 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52303837109 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546816479401 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4778511834 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.583333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215404412331 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785915948777 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589448607458 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134406171922 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522499981346 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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