New technologies and ways of buying and selling products are transforming the lives of consumers… To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons- Relevant examples.
It is true that consumers’ lives have greatly changed since the presence of modern technologies and recent purchasing and selling methods. I entirely agree with this statement, and this essay will delve in the reasons for such notable change.
Undoubtedly, new technologies, internet for example, have utterly contributed to changing the life of the consumer into a more luxurious one. To illustrate, online shopping and delivery services have made it easy for everyone to order whatever they need from any part of the world, and all of this happens with the click of a few buttons. For instance, in the past, my mother used to do a lot of effort walking from one store to the other in order to compare between offers, while today, I am able to make my purchases using my laptop with no such effort.
In addition, new ways of buying and selling products have guaranteed some flexibility and safety for consumers. For example, through plastic money, such as credit cards, customers not only are able to purchase their commodities at any time, but they also are less susceptible to burglary crimes. In 2016, a survey of 1000 customers, which conducted by the Times, showed that there is a significant decline in the rates of burglary among people who carry credit cards instead of cash money. Thus, if consumers seek both safety and flexibility during their shopping, they should replace cash money with a plastic one.
By way of conclusion, I reiterate that new technologies and modern ways of buying and selling have made some changes in peoples’ lives in terms of offering them fancy life style as well as safety and accessibility.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94945848375 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74569088554 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613718411552 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.1898045638 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.1 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199666448307 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824365413302 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657132713347 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134556337148 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590241907343 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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