Nowadays airlines provide more benefits to the rich, often achieving this by reducing areas used by the economy class to provide more comfort to the first class passengers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Recently, airline companies are sometimes decreasing the economy class’s spaces. As a focus in first-class passengers’ convenience. I totally agree with that but, taking some points in consideration.
Many people thought that limiting the number of economy class seats, Or even make the seat space more confined is an unacceptable greedy behavior. That is because of companies try to make all the use of the situation. For instance, some people may have an urgent situation or emergency case to catch a flight, Suddenly they found that all seats reserved except the first class ones. As a result, they have to pay more money without any consideration to their social class.
On the other hand, airline companies always are looking for making a profit. Not only, but also, building a good image and reputation. Which helps them in a world of competition. Likewise QATAR airlines and Etihad airlines from Qatar and Emirates respectively, they are targeting passengers from Europe and North America. So they tend to highlight the elegance of their first-class specifications. Consequently, travelers can be amused with the nice experience and feel comfortable more and more.
Always there is a point of settlement, that is achieved by if companies have a big fleet. That enhances the time schedule for flights, decreasing the waiting time. Furthermore, the costs will be decreased and hence a fascinating experience will be valid for all types of passengers.
To conclude, finding solutions for popular to easily catch their economic flights, keeping more convenient places for first-class travelers will help the society and keep airlines profit, I hope to find these solutions applicable in the nearest possible.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: are always
... On the other hand, airline companies always are looking for making a profit. Not only, ...
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Line 5, column 136, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
..., building a good image and reputation. Which helps them in a world of competition. L...
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Line 5, column 180, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Likewise,
...h helps them in a world of competition. Likewise QATAR airlines and Etihad airlines from...
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Line 5, column 261, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es from Qatar and Emirates respectively, they are targeting passengers from Europ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[1]
Message: The adverb 'Always' is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
... and feel comfortable more and more. Always there is a point of settlement, that is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, if, likewise, look, may, so, for instance, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38235294118 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02003653533 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.6509187571 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1176470588 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35294117647 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213072464651 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635618055603 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489835405695 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113660687669 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475519618954 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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