Nowadays the crime rate is increasing especially among teenagers. What are the reasons behind it? How we can reverse this trend? What punishment methods should be used, in your opinion?
In recent times, juvenile delinquency is augmenting. The plausible reasons for this maneuver are lack of education as well as improper parental guidance. This vogue could be altered by rendering education and by organizing seminars for parents about nurturing skills. Furthermore, in my opinion, community services should be given to the teenagers as a punishment unless they have committed a major crime.
Ostensibly, adolescents are unaware with the consequences that are occurred due to felonies because of lack of proper education. For example, most of the youngsters are committing minor crimes because the have not taught that it is against the laws. Secondly, both the parents are working nowadays, hence, they have few time to spend with their children. Consequently, Young generation is astray because no one is there to show them a right path.
There are several remedies to converse this trend. Firstly, a free of cost education should be provided by authorities. Therefore, children will aware about the perilous implications that could happen due to crime. Secondly, by organizing seminars and events, parents will learn fostering skills and eventually, they will nurture their descendants effectively.
In my opine, children should be punished as per the seriousness of the felony. Community services should be given for some time such as, planting trees or helping older people in old age home. By this way, not only teenagers will understand that what is right, but they will also learn that how to help others. In addition to this, if someone has committed a serious crime for example, mass murder, then they should be kept in incarcerate.
To recapitulate, though crime rate amidst teenagers is proliferating due to lack of education and less parental inappropriate parental care, it could be mitigated by educating them as well as by teaching parents that how to foster youngsters more responsibly. Furthermore, adolescents should be punished by giving them community services and for serious felonies, they should be imprisoned.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 317, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'few times'.
Suggestion: few times
... are working nowadays, hence, they have few time to spend with their children. Consequen...
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Line 5, column 280, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to foster'.
Suggestion: to foster
...seminars and events, parents will learn fostering skills and eventually, they will nurtur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in addition, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38080495356 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93561148612 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544891640867 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.5672262354 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5555555556 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9444444444 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.44444444444 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182277341704 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599294087611 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477147531992 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106110823921 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552141000042 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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