You share a parking area with several neighbors and have recently started having problems.Explain the problemsSuggesting ways to help the situationProposing a possible meeting

Essay topics:

You share a parking area with several neighbors and have recently started having problems.

Explain the problems
Suggesting ways to help the situation
Proposing a possible meeting

Dear Neighbors,

I am writing this letter to draw your attention regarding the problems which are faced by me related to common parking area.

As we are sharing the parking lot since long time, we have not risen any issues. However, from past few days I am observing that Mr. Khurana is parking his car in my parking space deliberately due to which I am not able to park my car. Moreover, some lights of the parking area is not working properly, therefore, it is arduous to park car especially at night.

To address these problems, I would like to give you some suggestions. Firstly, make rules and regulations that every members of society must have to park their cars in allotted area. Secondly, replace the faulty lights with new ones to resolve the problem of parking at night.

I am requesting you all to organize a meeting to untangle these issues. Furthermore, it would be a great idea to arrange the meeting on the next Tuesday because there will be a public holiday and it will be suitable for everyone.

I hope you will reply me at your earliest convenience.

Your faithfully,
Mohit Ratnu

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 56, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... reply me at your earliest convenience. Your faithfully, Mohit Ratnu
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 928.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75897435897 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60038939076 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641025641026 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5912908462 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3636363636 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 4.34317383033 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196052402973 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695919187674 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040038496266 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0941671632381 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539998400734 0.0580467560999 93% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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