In a world where smartphones and other digital gadgets have become a necessity for everyone's life, it is obvious that a child will be attracted to it from a very early age. Also, there are uncountable applications and games available free of cost that people get habituated to it and forgetting physical activities. It is affecting us without a doubt and especially for the children as they cannot prioritize its usage. Thus, with no doubt, it is a negative development for a child.
One thing to blame for this reason is that children are getting obsessed because of the continuous attention to the computer or television. Their eyes are also affecting due to their harmful rays at a very early age. Another psychological reason includes a decrease in concentration and it may affect their education as well. All these reasons can be eliminated in case of physical or sports activities as it burns the energy so that children can stay healthy and away from the diseases in childhood or teenhood. Some indoor games are an alternative to increasing the concentration as well as intellectual as a substitute for online games.
Another threat I find for children in this online gaming world is the content of the games. Children are getting more attracted to fighting and racing games. Games like Blue Whale provide harmful content to the children. As a result, teenagers were mostly got used to it and resulted in depression or even suicidal thoughts. By this means, the online world is serving poisonous content to the child's mind and thus creating a negative impact.
In sum, firmly believe that parents should limit their children for attaching to the online gaming world and encourage them to do the physical/outdoor activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s creating a negative impact. In sum, firmly believe that parents should limit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, thus, well, no doubt, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88127333458 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565517241379 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7856789149 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26666666667 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149220610195 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503015215183 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379870170615 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900565586611 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0116782452121 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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