Nowadays in many countries women have full time jobs. Therefore, it is logical to share household tasks evenly between men and women. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
The increased competition, these days, compels both men and women, in a family, to work to settle down their regular expenses. However, the old age perception that a woman needs to look after the house, even if she is working, has changed entirely. In my opinion, both husband and wife should carry equal responsibilities at home and for outside.
The women empowerment movement has taken an immense step in today's world. Women have become more fearless and tend to work even after getting into their fifties and post maternity too. Hence, the confidence level has reached to a certain level wherein women feels equally reasonable for managing the monetary chores, supporting the man in the family. Although, women step out and work for 8-10 hours of job still they haven't left their household chores. They take it as their responsibility to prepare food and make necessary cleaning at home. For example, in a recent survey of a magazine, about 64% of women, be it any job, still get involve in the household work on regular basis. Henceforth, saying women has successfully managed both the jobs is undeniable.
On contrary, Men are always considered as the earning member in the family. Men are never taught to do any kind of house activities. But, it is much important and visible that with changing time, Men have understood this phenomenon. Now men, help the women at home to complete their task, do grocery shopping, making it easier for women to have good amount of rest, apart from the job and house work. This is observed in a study published by a newspaper that 47% men feel to support women in household work. Hence, enough time is available for both to indulge in other activities and to spend time with families.
To close, I completely agree that both should do each task equally so that a great sense of responsibility is understood. The pressure of running the house or doing household work does not come on the shoulder of one person. This acceptance, indeed, would be fruitful for future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 419, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, look, so, still, apart from, for example, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84057971014 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62650283043 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591304347826 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.4377117016 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8947368421 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1578947368 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.68421052632 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240959105459 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746521758341 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477668010072 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14348042877 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076718731575 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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