Nowadays many people choose ready made food and refuse to cook at home. why do you think it happens. what are the advantage and disadvantages of such a choice.
In this modern era, majority of people are struggling hard to keep up their work life balance. In the profound impact of this ready-made and restaurant food consumptions is at all time high. Modern people spend most of their times in Work place, as a mounting pressure and competition they struggle at work, makes it hard in coping up with their household activities and food. In this essay will discuss the reason and its relative effect of this tendency.
There are many factors which has led to dependency on ready-made food such as fast pace life, east accessibility, Living independently and time friendly. First and foremost is that fast food even though does not give required vitamins or proteins, but they are tasty and most of the time craving. Earlier people used to stay with family, due to globalization and urbanization majority of family members are scattered for the purpose of either work or studies, hence dependency on fast food is at extreme high. However people are getting aware of its impact on health in the long run.
Although there are few positives of ready made food, negative far outweighs its positive. Every person should consume healthy and rich diet foods. As country's economy and development is based on the people health and growth. Home made foods are usually healthy and rich with vitamins, proteins and are also hygienic. Fast food usually leads to health problems and most common is obesity. Fast food consumption once in a week or two is acceptable, however daily consumption will lead to deterioration of health and starts weakening your immune system. For instance the protein and vitamin contents in vegetables is higher that burgers, coke or pizzas. Hence it always healthy to have green vegetables for maintaining health.
All in all, home made food should be preferred over ready made to get a good nutrients. although they seems tasty and craving it has to be avoided for the betterment of their health.
- More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people say that the price increase of fattening foods will solve this problem. To what extend do you agree or disagree? 78
- Fast food is becoming a part of our daily life. Some people argue that fast food has negative effects on our lifestyle and diet. Do you agree or disagree. 67
- Should people get a job right after school or should they attend university. Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
- Sugar consumption is too harmful Some say it is governments responsibility to limit sugar intake while others say it 039 s individual who are responsible Discuss both the views and give your own opinion 87
- Government money should be used to support children in school for sports rather than to support professional sports and arts that perform for general public To what extent you agree or disagree 66
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, so, as to, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98780487805 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60907216933 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557926829268 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8236766748 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8888888889 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17559473082 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563143783143 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534463489133 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110652890309 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0165194973256 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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