Nowadays many students live with their families while others go to another city to study at a university. Discuss advantages and disadvantages of both scenarios. Include relevant examples in your answer.
University education plays a vital role in one's success. More and more students now aspire to study in a foreign university as a result of ever-increasing globalization, however, some still prefer to attend a local university and stay with their families. Both the trends have their own positives and downsides, which the essay will discuss.
Family support perhaps is the primary advantage to university graduates living with their families. Having family by your side in the university life simplifies student life, their family members can take care of tasks such as cooking and cleaning, which generally are the responsibilities of students livings away from home. Additionally, living with family during university education saves a lot of wealth which would have been spent on accommodation and other expenses while living outside hometown. However, in this style, teenagers do not get much chance to explore the outside world which is imperative for overall learning.
On the flip side, hostel life gives the sense of self-dependence which develops survival skills in students living away from their homes. Being able to handle university-related concerns on their own, without much assistance from their parents, equip such students with self-confidence and teach several self-surviving strategies. These skills which are developed living away from families are helpful in future crisis. One possible downside of attending university in a different city could be the shortage of time to focus on course studies due to extra responsibilities such as laundry, cooking etcetera.
In conclusion, it is evident that both the styles carry their own pros along with some disadvantages. Extra res
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54580152672 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07488648068 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614503816794 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2125987728 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.083333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220193481033 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784967293008 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552221776054 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129563773954 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425021194479 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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