Nowadays more and more people have to compete with young people for the same jobs.
What problems does this cause?
What are some possible solutions?
Recently, there has been rise in the competition between relatively older people and younger one for the same posts at the workplace. It wreaks unemployment among people and less experienced staff in the office. Nonetheless, allocation of equal number of seats for all age employees and providence of colossal amount of pension are some way out to this issue.
This increasing competition can lead to redundancy in older people as young people with their smart brains and marvel degrees succeed to get the job. As a result, whole family has to suffer due to unemployment and this can begets number of problems to the family and thus the society. Moreover, by employing more young people, office also faces lack of experience among them which leads to fewer efficacy in their work. Ne plausible illustration is that in recent study conducted in Pakistan shows that those companies which hire only young staff, lack stability in their performance hence face hindrance in flourishment.
Nevertheless, this issue can be sort out by applying few things such as assigning balanced seats for both age groups consequently, there would be equal opportunity for both of them to work and support their respective families and none has to face the misery of unemployment. Not only that but, a handsome amount of pension for old age group can mitigate this problem and they can spend their lives contended and relaxed, as there would be satisfaction that their family is well supported by the amount they received therefore, not have to stress out themselves by working.
In conclusion, lack of job opportunity for seniors and decrease in experienced staff in office are major hurdles due to rising competition for job among young and other people which can be curbing by giving equal seats to them for work and providing a reasonable amount of pension to old people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'beget'
Suggestion: beget
...suffer due to unemployment and this can begets number of problems to the family and th...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ence face hindrance in flourishment. Nevertheless, this issue can be sort out...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06148867314 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74951425838 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537216828479 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.366390258 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.4 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.9 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.8 7.06120827912 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184980234775 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789752361115 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400777269748 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116752037871 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035031250586 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.66 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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