In our world today, many people need things to be done instantly for them. As per my belief, the era of technological inventions has made it possible, and It is a positive development, so I will discuss further in the body paragraphs.
The main reason why individuals want things to be done immediately is because the invention of technology has made it a possibility. In other words, the invention of the internet has helped companies carry out services swiftly such as delivery. Similarly, the mobile phone is an invention that has made it possible to get various informations across to second parties instantly. Clearly, more and more people would want things to be done instantly for them given that technology has made that instant service a reality.
On the other hand, when things are done fast, even if it is impromptu, it is a good development, and I will explain them ahead. Firstly, when you call your bank customer care, they receive your information, and act on it immediately. This solves the issue of going to your service provider physically. Secondly, tasks like transferring money to relations can be done on the spot, and this task can be carried out on a bank app, so you do not need to queue to transfer cash through the ATM. Therefore, it is indeed a positive development as things are being done instantly.
To conclude, individual people love to achieve a task or service instantly, and this is because they know that technology has made it achievable, so to this end, I can comfortably say that I believe it is a positive development.
- Write a letter to your friend to recommend a book to read that you have read You should include Describe the book How it can help him her Where can he get it from 73
- Physical education and sport should be compulsory for all students in all schools Do you agree or disagree with this statement 73
- The number of TV programs is growing day by day Some people say it is good as it gives people more choices while others say it affects the quality of TV programs Discuss both the views and give your opinion 56
- Some people think students in primary school secondary school should be taught how to manage money because it is an important life skill Do you agree or disagree 67
- People buy things which they don t need Why this is happening Is it a positive or negative development for the Individual and for society 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81111111111 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89974456091 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537037037037 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9001206383 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.25 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336664186692 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113542447225 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851707354117 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180441753783 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593578206941 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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