Nowadays most people are not fit and active enough, compared to the past. What are the main causes of the situation? Suggest some possible solutions?
It is considered that people in the past were more active and physically fit as compared to the contemporary generation. This essay will discuss the main causes of this phenomenon and some solutions in resolution.
At the outset, people are more unfit and inactive because they have become habitual to sedentary life-style. It is all due to technological advancements as life has become more comfortable. For instance, in the past people used to walk a lot for their daily chores, however, now the roads are flooded with private and public vehicles, used often by the population for their activities. Thus, activeness and fitness of people have vanished in and they are confronting dire ailments such as obesity, cardiovascular problems.
Secondly, lack of time is another cause of fitness problem because it has spoiled the healthy habits of the people. It is witnessed that, due to the career pressure, life balance of humanity has been ruined. Instead of focussing on exercise and brisk-walking, a large part of the community is bound to spend more than 15 hours on their workplaces to meet both ends. Therefore, however, in the past, life was so simple for people and they were partaking in sports activities like swimming, Cricket and so on because of spare time.
When it comes to solutions, some effective methods could be adopted to motivate people towards an active life. Firstly, the government should encourage people about the benefits of exercise that could be imperative to pursue their careers outstandingly. Secondly, there should limit the working hours to enables people to spare their time for fitness rather than overindulging in their careers as healthy employees can outperform to meet the targets. Hence, by implementing these measures, people can enjoy the health benefits of an active lifestyle.
To conclude, it is believed that modern humans are not as healthy as their predecessors. This essay discussed the causes of this issue as technological comfort and the dearth of time, and the solutions like more health awareness among people and rules to limit the time of working to keep people healthy and active.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 336, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put before the verb 'used'.
Suggestion: often used
...ooded with private and public vehicles, used often by the population for their activities....
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Line 9, column 531, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ricket and so on because of spare time. When it comes to solutions, some effecti...
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Line 13, column 552, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...health benefits of an active lifestyle. To conclude, it is believed that modern ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1809.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18338108883 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82001416037 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527220630372 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6495530457 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0625 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8125 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208141912898 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706337581616 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631017964758 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135881026717 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0843295841284 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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