Nowadays parents are sending their children on trips abroad for educational purposes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
In recent times, there is an increasing number of parents who send their children on trips abroad for educational purposes. This newly established practice provides a valuable and enriching experience for their children. However, it may also have some disadvantages.
Education is one of the most valuable assets a person can have and, besides in a school, it can be obtained by traveling the world and discovering new cultures. Having this in mind, if parents want their child to become an educated individual, they could send the child on some kind of venture to the world at an early age. There are a lot of summer schools, events and a wide variety of volunteer organizations where families can send their younger members to. T This kind of exposure and diversification of experiences can broaden their views and contribute to development of their characters in a unique way. Additionally, there is a possibility they will encounter some interesting individuals of their age and form new friendships.
On the other hand, these trips are usually very expensive and can take a financial toll on an average family. Moreover, it can put a lot of pressure on the child, who is probably too young not to get stressed about it. Going abroad means that the child will be separated from its family and friends. In fact, children will most likely be scared to go to a foreign country because they might not yet realize all the benefits they can have in the long run. For this reason and coupled with high expenditures, sending children abroad for educational purposes will not be the easiest decision for a parent to make.
I think that someone who was sent abroad for educational purpose at an early age, should be very grateful and appreciate what his parents did for him. Surely that helped him develop into a person he is today. Although prices can be high, those families who are more fortunate than others should seriously consider their children experiencing life abroad.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, may, moreover, so, i think, in fact, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92097264438 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67618434668 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580547112462 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2508865137 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.1875 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6875 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339988477899 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111455723419 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123854033943 0.0667982634062 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23551157005 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100404224196 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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