Nowadays people are getting married and having children in their thirties. Does it have a positive or a negative impact on the society? Give your opinion and examples.
Recently, many people tend to get married and have children rather later than what it used to be. I believe this tendency has advantages since people can have more experience in life before marriage and it could drop the divorce rate. This essay will discuss why late marriage in the thirties would be beneficial than the early marriage.
People who get married later in their thirties could have some time for dedicating to their personal life before marriage. Those who get married earlier and have children are often too busy taking caring of the spouse and children to have less chance of studying and other things they could have done if they were single. For example, my uncle had to give up his eager to study because he had his wife and children to take care of. He had no other choice but to get a job to support them in his 20s. In this sense, getting married and having children in thirties would be much better than in the twenties in that people could pursue what they want without risk of caring for other family members.
Also, the divorce rate would be lower if people got married in the thirties. The reason is that one can be more mature and consider more carefully about the marriage. One of statistic results regarding to divorce rate shows that a couple can be more likely to get divorced if they got married in their twenties. And this trend tends to be less likely happening as the age of marriage increases. Thus, late marriage has more positive impacts on carrying it out through the rest of life.
In conclusion, the way of people getting married changes as society develops. Getting married in the thirties has advantages in terms of dedication to personal life and lower divorce rate. In my opinion, it is beneficial to one’s life to get married late with taking some time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66355140187 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2683192611 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485981308411 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1682132147 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5625 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0625 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8125 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296177696725 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103157744908 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780110077594 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175086106392 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576026214712 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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