With the advent of 21st century, people are spending large amounts of money on marriage functions. This culture is derived from Bollywood to some extend. There is huge pressure on the families to make marriage party a successful function so all the guests can be happy. Various people think expensive weddings are not required and it cause problems for the bride and the groom.
To embark with, every family has a certain allocated budget which they plan to spend on the wedding. In maximum cases, expenses are more than projected one's as they are last minute expenses and some minor expenses are not counted as well. Spending of weddings is increasing at an exponential rate. for instance, gifting a car on marriage had become a status symbol nowadays and every parent think that it is mandatory to gift a car. Very small segment of the family has started to think rationally and they are option for court marriage and private reception.
Expense of weddings is increasing, however, in my opinion it cause various problems for bride and groom. Various people think that rather than hosting a big function bride and groom should save for themselves as a contingency reserve. It becomes tough for the couple to cope up with immediate life after the wedding as huge spending on wedding might cause little financial crunch. Large functions goes for around four to five days due to which health of the couple also decline as it causes restlessness and anxiety.
To elucidate, large spending's has a impact on the bride and the groom. Some initiate should be taken by couples to make there families understand that lavish wedding is not what makes them happy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91134751773 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4444458734 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560283687943 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.9391402079 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.3333333333 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73333333333 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359868891517 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126271685612 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10930182777 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219591407875 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0931487740554 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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