Nowadays, marriage parties are regarded as social status symbol resulting on lavish spending on it. These days, costly wedding ceremony has resulted many facet of problems for the bride and groom. This essay will explain the major problems cause by expensive marriage parties such as financial burden and psychological trauma.
Firstly, marriages are only getting costlier with the passage of time which has resulted huge financial burden for bride and groom. In order to maintain the social trend of spending huge sums on these ceremony, couples are spending their lifetime savings. Furthermore, bride and groom are also adding on financial burden by taking loans from their family members Peers or in some other cases from banks. For example, my cousin recent marriage ceremony cost him a fortune as his savings was not sufficient resulting on having to sell his ansestral land. Thus, marriage these days doesn't end up being cause of happiness but also adds upon the financial burden.
Secondly, wedding ceremony has also resulted on psychological stress among newly married couples. In other words, the pressure of making one's wedding best in their social circles, they end up getting obsessed with small details like inviting well-known singer or some high-profile guests. Moreover, lavish parties also demand considerable time and effort which mean long gap from carrer and adding on more pressure. For instance, my senior manager had to take one month long leave to arrange his wedding function which cost him big corporate opportunity. These common scene where individual add pressure on themself when they try to stress upon larger weighting function.
In conclusion, wedding ceremony are being a social issue affecting bride and groom more than anyone else. Therefore, in my opinion, larger expenses and disturbed mental stage are some of the common issues for bride and groom due to ever rising wedding cost.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 150, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun facet seems to be countable; consider using: 'many facets'.
Suggestion: many facets
...s, costly wedding ceremony has resulted many facet of problems for the bride and groom. Th...
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Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this ceremony' or 'these ceremonies'?
Suggestion: this ceremony; these ceremonies
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Line 3, column 580, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...sestral land. Thus, marriage these days doesnt end up being cause of happiness but als...
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Line 5, column 138, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... In other words, the pressure of making ones wedding best in their social circles, t...
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Line 7, column 180, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...expenses and disturbed mental stage are some of the common issues for bride and groom due t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30718954248 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43683938078 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.8689007039 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.266666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9333333333 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187077378762 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690853195474 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463635106848 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13231204454 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611789899868 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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