Some people argue that employees can contribute immensely when they are motivated to join fitness centers while others think it is waste of time and money for offices. This essay will show how fitness clubs can be source of increase productivity for organizations and explain difficulty in measuring increased productivity.
Firstly, gym and sports activities improve one's physical and mental health; consequently improving work-related productivity in an organization. Employees these days face lots of stress making them vulnerable to physical and mental fatigue. Working long shift under stressful conditions is quite normal which results on lower productivity. For example, a recent study by Stanford University has highlighted correlation between under performance and hectic long office hours which can be partially upset by exercising. By subsidizing employees for fitness activities, it can act as catalyst for roust performance among employees.
On the other hand, it can be challenging for offices to track and relate gym and sports activities with workplace efficiency. Moreover, there are plethora of things that may be going through employees’ life. Although there is no denying about health related advantages by exercising, there are also not any credible scientific findings to prove the relationship. For instance, financial benefits and bonuses for achieving targets never goes out of fashion when it comes to motivating employees. It is generally rewarding for management to provide monetary benefits to get their job done.
To conclude, motivating employees for gym and sports clubs may result in better physical and mental health whereas its relationship with enhance work efficacy can be debatable. As far as I am concerned, physical activities should be promoted by organizations because healthy team can focus their entire energy towards company’s goals; however, they should also explore alternatives to motivate workers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, whereas, while, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74226804124 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04365718067 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659793814433 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5507940012 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.357142857 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123986501242 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452067968497 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0266773800886 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0789411625453 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0107432738972 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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