Nowadays people are spending more time in workplace and staying away from home. Discuss its advantages and disadvantages with your own experiences.
The work-life balance is a novel concept that many companies are promoting when hiring employees. Staying longer hours in workplaces can have both benefits and drawbacks. Let us further analyse how this would be beneficial and impact on personal life.
To begin with, if we consider the value of allocating more time to the workplace, it is undeniable that the majority of working-class people has to spend a good amount of their life in work stations. Depending on the work, people have to put more effort to do their work. For instance, to achieve their monthly targets many people in sales and marketing sectors work extra hours. Which gives them salary increments, bonuses as a result and better carrier prospects. Admittedly, to have a quality life, this extra cash is mandatory. Furthermore, people work long hours at the office because they simply love their work and because of the passion they have. Research and Development workers are a good example of this category. They never consider extra work as a burden.
However, to have a quality family life people should spend more time in their homes. Especially, those who work longer hours are missing an abundance of valuable times with their offsprings. To elaborate, if such workaholic parent missed their child's prize giving at school, the child would feel abandoned and sad while the parents would later regrate that. Additionally, if this kind of incidents happens regularly, that would negatively impact to child's education and happiness of the family as well.
To mitigate this, many organizations are introducing this work-life balance concept, which is equipped with options such as working from home, four days work week, and many other options.
To recapitulate, although there are advantages of working longer hours, people should balance their personal life by putting more time to home. Working from home and lesser workweek are better alternatives which people could try in order to balance their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, well, while, as to, for instance, kind of, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19937694704 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61246856316 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573208722741 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.7966769219 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7222222222 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14182863991 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516367228881 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586714665418 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0892743769111 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438263624295 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.