Study shows that many criminals have a low level of education. For this reason, some people believe that the best way to reduce crime is to educate people in prison, so that they can get a job when they leave prison. Do you agree or disagree?
It is believed by some that educating people within the prison can decrease crime by allowing them to find jobs when they leave prison. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this argument because it is my belief that education is the key to success in this world.
Admittedly, there can be some practical issues when providing education to prisoners. Firstly, most of the aged offenders are not willing to learn new things and their primary level education also may not be enough. Secondly, governments should allocate some resource and money to do such change inside prisons and most of the developing countries cannot afford such systems. To explain, even though prisons are facilitated to provide some education, the willingness of the detainees has a significant impact to the outcome. Moreover, majority of old and uneducated people are not ready to learn new things due to their attitudes towards education and mental conditions such as laziness, and ignorance.
However, if prison authorities could implement such systems it would greatly help to reduce the crime rate. In fact, prisoners have to obey whatever the rule implemented inside and nobody can avoid that. Rather than providing curricular based education, each person should be allowed to learn whatever the skills which they are willing to learn. For instance, there may be some offenders who have done decent jobs before they get arrested and for such people, prison should allow to practice and update their knowledge on their previous jobs. In addition, new skill development program can be introduced to teach them some industry-related skills such as carpentry, and plumbing for males while for females, skills such as sewing, cooking and gardening can be introduced. This gives them some confidence in finding jobs after release and would help to prevent re-offending whilst reducing the crime rate.
In conclusion, I believe, although there are some challenges to implement such systems inside prisons, if provided, detainees would be greatly beneficial when finding jobs after they have been released
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...nding jobs after they have been released
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30722891566 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67363181529 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560240963855 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8577188898 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.857142857 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8571428571 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315455169553 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11425693139 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0912559554919 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20415465525 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0897611529783 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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