In the present day, people who live in urban areas face numerous problems. In this essay, I will vividly explain these challenges and also the thought if moving to a smaller city will be more advantageous as suggested by the government.
Metropolitan city tends to have a dense number of people living in it, which results in several problems. Firstly, big city is the primary aim of any individual to land a proper job to cater their personal needs, mostly provincial aspirants. But, the problem is that this thought always lead to overpopulation. A huge amount of people living in a certain place increases the possibility to contract and spread grievous disease. For example, a recent study of Department of Health states that there is an increase of 30% for HIV infected individuals for the year 2018 in urban areas, this disease can only transmit through sexual intercourse and is rapidly increasing in certain slum areas in the city. Moreover, people are not always successful in the city, hence, there will always be urban slums. These people are scarce and sometimes lean on doing crime just to fulfill their needs. For an instance, people living in squatter areas are forced by poverty to sell drugs on the street.
However, a thought arises on whether the government should aspire people to transfer to petite city, which, I strongly believe will outwits its merits. Transferring people to a new smaller city is a good approach to create a new metropolis from scratch. But, this is not the actual solution, the government together with all the people who live in the country should aim to help each other and follow the law enforced by the government.
Hence, I strongly believe that top brass problems such as disease and crime due to overcrowded place will not be eradicated by means of moving to a new place. We as citizens of the country should help one another to aim for the better good, moreover, we must abide by the rules and regulations governed by the authorities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, so, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8504398827 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64262416445 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0727585574 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.266666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7333333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261547442868 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884699345483 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406742971815 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151474223264 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414372605403 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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