Nowadays, people living in large cities face many problems in their daily lives. What are these problems? Do you think the government should encourage people to move to smaller towns?
Living quality issues are a concern for almost everyone today, as we see many people are struggling for make a living in big cities. However, I strongly believe rulers should consider some encouragement plans to persuade them to migrate to lower population areas.
The health issues are the main problem caused by big cities. These problems mostly derived from air pollution, which mostly exists in overcrowded cities. Cars gas emissions and big industries nearby leads to variety of illness such as lung cancer. Furthermore, mental pressures which come along with living in those places have devastating effect on public life quality. For example, job pressures like fear of arriving late to work because of traffic jams or doing extra time work to not being redundant from their jobs will effect on their work-life balance and consequently, leads to serious personal and social problems.
In term of solutions, government can take some positive steps to tackle this problem by motivating for citizens to immigrate from metropolis. Firstly, over population have many expenses for country which can be used for development of other places. The fund reallocating, also have many benefits like wealth distribution and eliminating poverty on other areas. Finally, people will use from advantage of smaller cities such as spending more time on hobbies or family rather than stuck in big cities traffics or rush hours which will enhance their wellness and reduce public health costs for government.
In conclusion, dwell in megacities caused many psychological and welfare issues for citizens and it seems to me government with persuasion of residents to relocation to urban areas can achieve to a win-win bargain.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30514705882 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70641928416 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639705882353 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.1795760565 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.25 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169100875493 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558179386174 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342904980514 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0934634490221 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340464874947 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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