Nowadays people try to balance their work with other things in life but only some could actually achieve it so far What are the reasons for that How can we solve this problem

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Nowadays people try to balance their work with other things in life, but only some could actually achieve it so far. What are the reasons for that? How can we solve this problem?

Work-life balance is essential to enhance the level of fitness. It has been observed that numerous people struggle to harmonize their work with other chores of life, however very few of them achieve it very rigorously. This essay will discuss some reasons for this situation such as sedentary lifestyle and irregular routine of people and also suggest some ways forward to overcome this problem.

There are several reasons why people can not balance their work with other things such as adoption of sedentary lifestyle and improper daily routine to name but a few. Nowadays, many people have opted very comfortable life, they want to do everything by sitting their place without any physical movement, consequently this turns them into lethargic person who are not able to balance their life. In addition, irregular routine of people is also the prime reason for this imbalance, eventually this leads to chaos in all the activities of a day. For instance, according to survey of The Hindustan Times, more than 87% people have accepted that they are not able to manage their routine life due to irregular routine. Therefore, improvement in these things is extremely important to balance one’s life.

However, the problem of imbalance work-life can be solved with the proper management and self determination. The appropriate management of all the activities of day with suitable timing will definitely tend to a balanced life. Specifically, one should have to make a feasible time-table and it must be followed strictly to accomplish entire activities of a particular day. Moreover, a wonderful quality termed as Self determination plays key role to maintain the work-life balance. People who deliberately stick to their routine successfully achieve the balance in their life. For example, Dr. K. Sridharan, CEO and Founder of Kokarn Railways, at the age of 67, he strictly follow his daily routine to meet the deadline of a project. Ultimately, an individual can easily overcome from the imbalanced work-life by implementing above mentioned techniques.

To conclude, extreme satisfaction in life can only achieved by balanced work-life. The situation of imbalanced work-life can become more severe and may lead to serious damage to fitness of a person. Therefore, we should try to be active by avoiding sedentary lifestyle and irregular routine, which can easily achieved by proper management and a strong self-determination.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 675, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'follows'.
Suggestion: follows
...Railways, at the age of 67, he strictly follow his daily routine to meet the deadline ...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2057.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34285714286 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94884250513 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 680.4 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3380927161 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.263157895 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2631578947 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05263157895 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397436773473 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125347685087 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735221857816 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256555212815 0.151304729494 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415825239448 0.056905535591 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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