Nowadays shopping is the most common activity for some young people. why is this so? is it a positive or negative development.
Youngsters have developed shopping as their most common activity in recent times. Various media platforms have been contributing to developing interest among youngsters. In my opinion, it is a negative development. This essay will focus on few possible reasons behind this trend and then concentrate on its negative impacts.
Firstly, focusing on some possible causes of this trend. Media & technology have shown tremendous growth from the past few years and have become accessible to almost everyone. These sources feed young people with knowledge of various fields that have generated good interest in the latest fashion trends in clothes and decoration. To fulfill their temptations, youngsters shop online as well as offline. For instance, e-shopping sites promote their products through actors having millions of followers to ensure their high sales.
On the other hand, this high rate of shopping would cause numerous problems. To begin with, over expenses, shoppers run behind costly international brands because they feel it will give them superior status in society. Secondly, high-priced items will generate high debt on them, which will lead them towards some illegal deeds. Moreover, if anyone shops without deciding their preferences, it will eventually cause a lot of clutter and mess in their lives. For example, middle-class people take credits from a bank at a high rate which they will pay through large installments.
To conclude, although young people love doing shopping by the influence of some sources, it will lead them to a disturbed lifestyle surrounded by negative emotions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, for instance, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71666666667 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.45417180171 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6875 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1874570891 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4666666667 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229525143342 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778037542315 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660248618778 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152312881867 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623221685349 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.6 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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