A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the unpaid work. In your letter:
Explain why you want to do voluntary work at the museum.
Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful.
Give details of when you would be available for work
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am jolly, living in London street near the museum and I write in reference to the job advertisement for voluntary work at the museum published on www.bestjobs.com. I have a keen interest in ancient history and working here will provide me the opportunity to learn new things while working. Moreover, in my next semester, I would get a project on the ancient life of people so this would be a great chance in that perspective also.
Furthermore, I have an ample amount of computer knowledge as well as organizing things suitably. These skills will not only be of great use in making records and but also helpful in keeping things in order. currently, I am on my autumn break for about a month band have enough time to do this voluntary work. I will be available in the afternoon from 2 pm to 5 pm on weekdays and 9 am to 2 pm on weekends.
I hope you will find me suitable for this work and I look forward to getting a prompt reply from you.
Yours faithfully,
Jolly
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 169, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...he museum published on www.bestjobs.com.I have keen interest in ancient history ...
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Line 3, column 200, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...jobs.com.I have keen interest in ancient history and working here will provide me...
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Line 3, column 292, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...tunity to learn new things while working . Moreover , in my next semester I would ...
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Line 3, column 303, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...earn new things while working . Moreover , in my next semester I would get a proje...
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Line 3, column 428, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...be a great a chance in that prospective also. Furthermore, I have ample amount of...
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Line 5, column 94, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: These
...e as well as organising things suitably.These skills will not only be of a great use...
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Line 5, column 134, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...These skills will not only be of a great use in making records and but also helpf...
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Line 5, column 207, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Currently
...lso helpful in keeping things in order. currently I am on my autumn break for about a mon...
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Line 7, column 71, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to getting'.
Suggestion: to getting
...itable for this work and I look forward to get a prompt reply from you. Yours fai...
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Line 9, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...pt reply from you. Yours faithfully , Jolly
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57303370787 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88581893355 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640449438202 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.5115304336 44.8134815571 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.285714286 76.5299724578 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4285714286 16.8248392259 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1428571429 4.34317383033 234% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25740543718 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103106813836 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899878809114 0.0603063233224 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162642404608 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547713380351 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 8.37731958763 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.