Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can government do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
The amount of waste produced is increasing day by day. The main reason for this increased garbage production is change in lifestyle. However, this problem can be easily solved with government's intervention. Authorities have to spread awareness among citizens and can guide them about the effective ways to reuse the things.
These days people are shifting from tradition to modern lifestyle. Everybody is having busy work schedule, so rather than doing the task physically, they are preferring ready made things or automated machines to complete their task. For example, in ancient time people use to cook their own food, but now trend of purchasing ready to cook food is coming due to which waste of can, bottles and boxes are tremendously increasing. Moreover, children's and teenagers also prefer to eat fast food and neglect fruits and vegetables. Fast food are served in packets with huge cost spend on packing, which ultimately become the waste. Therefore, change in way of living has leaded to increased waste production.
Government has take various steps, but the most effective is spreading awareness by organizing camps and seminars. Citizens must be made aware about the negative impacts of increased rubbish. For instant, recently India's Prime Minister Mr Narender Modi has introduced clean India Campaign which was successful in reducing the litter on the road, by guiding the people about the importance of cleanliness. In addition, imparting the knowledge about, how to reuse the rubbish will also be helpful in two ways. It will reduce the waste and further utilization of recycled product will have advantages in monetary terms also.
In conclusion, this problem of increased rubbish production is the major issue, as people are continuously reeling on easy way of life. State should try to overcome out of this by adopting effective ways, so that we can live in the clean world
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: as well
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Suggestion:
..., so that we can live in the clean world
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21824104235 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69547073799 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628664495114 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9595448224 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2352941176 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0588235294 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17647058824 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141749715346 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041723602977 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036219955652 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0879876513473 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038024279666 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.