Nowadays, some buildings such as offices and schools have open space designs instead of separate rooms. Why is it so? Is it a positive or negative development?
Multinational companies are investing in major cities for their businesses which has definitely created many employment opportunities. However, due to this investment competition it is difficult to occupy large floor plan for an office for a cheaper cost. Hence, cost being the primary reason offices have now adopted open space designs. In my opinion, it is a positive development and companies are proven to be getting outstanding results from this approach. The following paragraphs will elaborate the reasons for my opinion.
Firstly, the fresh concept of open space design has resulted in better communication between the employees which otherwise is less likely to be possible in case of cabin designs. Employees can reach out to one another more efficiently. Additionally, a recent study conducted by human resources department of google company has concluded that better communication leads to a good co-worker bonding which ultimately results in outstanding productivity.
Secondly, sense of distinctions between different level of employees has deteriorated. Feeling as equally as other employees provides a person with good confidence and motivates to achieve the company goals with more enthusiasm. For example, according to an experiment conducted by TechnoTactics, a startup company, manager who had spent a month working with his team by being physically present with them had resulted in 40% sales growth for that month. TechnoTactics has continued to follow this approach which has helped them to a grow rapidly and become one of the successful startups of the country in the present day.
In conclusion, considering above positive aspects about the change in office floor plan to adopt open office design has provided many promising results. It is needless to say that companies can gain remarkable amount of success by accepting this change.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52264808362 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04642019138 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613240418118 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1817106288 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.214285714 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0998417072505 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0358428324444 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567567499628 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0666096484954 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463268953193 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.