Developing countries in white large foreign companies to open office and factories in order to help their economy however other feel that foreign company should be shut out and instead the government should have the local companies to contribute to the economic growth to what extent do you agree or disagree.
Business is becoming increasingly international. Business is backbone of economy. If outside country business comes into our country and make infrastructure so, automatically our economy has increased. However l, other people think if it will be happened so, there can be big effects on the local companies. I intend to explain my view before reasonable conclusion can be drawn.
To initiate with, whenever new companies enter into the global world with new technology and new plan. It is creates a certain type of job opportunity and a lot of people can be obtain better job into new office and factories and they can improve the ratio of employment. Likewise, new companies do produces large number of products and provides better quality and quantity to the people. For exemplify, in the present some jobs are mostly related to the computer and it factors. In the United Kingdom is hub of IT field so, they gets numerous student into your company with well paid salary.
On the contrary, a lot of people believe government should help the local Business. Business in the local economy is the boost in employment in the region. Many times government should be decrease the taxes on the local business so, they can contribute to the economic growth. In add, only one of them know about how to run business into the small area. For example, the government agencies such as the US small business administration provide the loan guarantees to small business and encourage local banks to work with start-up or established the companies that want to expand.
In a nut shell, my opinion on par with that I agree to the present statement. I believe the government should promote large foreign companies as well as local business therefore, both to contribute to the economy increasly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However,
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Message: Did you mean 'decreased'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, likewise, so, therefore, well, for example, such as, as well as, in my view, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95986622074 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78368177791 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545150501672 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.6042963468 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2352941176 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5882352941 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47058823529 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245736718866 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744925052216 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822655096643 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155979118619 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612471537843 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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