It has been of the date in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science subject at University what do you think are the causes of the problem what are the effect on society

Essay topics:

It has been of the date in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science subject at University what do you think are the causes of the problem what are the effect on society?.

Science and Technology has increased in our surrounding area. People cannot run very few steps without science but these scenerio completely changed because certain number of people leave the science subject after completed 12 standard. I believe there are a lot of problems behind it and it can be negative influenced on the society.
To initiate with, science play a vital role in our future time. However, people do dislike the science subjects because of several reasons, first and foremost reason many times schools have not good knowledge teachers on particular subject and experience. In addition, teachers have not good skills such as how to send the knowledge very easy way to the students and lake of communication skill. The second reason, science is divided into three portion, therefore schools have separated laboratory like physics, chemistry, biology and not sufficien equipment related to practical. For example, many times students prefer other subjects such as art, music, dancing, sports and many more so, they do not choose the science subjects due to lack of infrastructure.
On the contrary, I believe it can be big effects on the youth icon. Government want to the best students for increased science and technology but, they cannot get capable students and they can be very difficult for invention of new things. In add, while the rapidly increasing a number of students takes different subjects law, economics, business and so on. So,a huge number of completed college student would have to face unemployment.
In a nutshell, government should take effective steps to the students and should make different strategies that major of students choose the science subjects.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, such as, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26937269373 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71420713747 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594095940959 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9184806743 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.846153846 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19589681332 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067497635539 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490528853556 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11791984522 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318438140246 0.056905535591 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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