You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.
Why do you think this is happening?
What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
The mordern society are producing enromous quantity of garbage which is in increasing pattern. The foremost reason behind this is increasing popullation and changing fashion,while encouraging to produce reclying product can play significant role to lessen waste materials.
Higher the popullation, higher the production which results more garbage. The number of people are increasing and expected to rise by 10% by 2050. Likewise, rubbish produce by human are also expected to rise by significant percentage. when the demand will be high, manufacturer had to produce more product to met the demand. Additionally, changing fashion trend also play vital role in increasing wastage. when the trend change people throw the existing product and get new one. For Instance, people throw away instead of repairing and purchase new one.
There are numerious step that government can implement to reduce the gargabe. They have to encourage people to use more and more recycle product. For example, The state can banned plastic bags and start using paper bag to carry. Also, they can advertise to carry bag from home while shopping. Furthermore, Educating their citizen about the negativce effect of wastage and what next generation can suffer from this. They can enforce law of compulsary education of effect of waste materials from the primary school.
In conclusion, rising popullation and their changing fashion and trend encouring to produce more garbage which can destroy the enviromet and health as well. The government must imply effective rules to tackle this problem and educate the people to lessen this in future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
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Suggestion: When
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Suggestion: When
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Message: The verb 'can' requires base form of the verb: 'ban'.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, likewise, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3937007874 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67939925326 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570866141732 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7173744553 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5882352941 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9411764706 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29411764706 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192670245921 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590519903638 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417531176041 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118225141582 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023978000576 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.39 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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