With a growing population, many people believe that we should focus on more genetically modified foods.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of doing this?
Undoubtedly, from last few decades various leaders around the globe are encountering the issue of scarcity of food because of the up surging rate of population. While some believe that to tackle this problem genetically modified food will be best solution, others oppose it. In this essay, I will discuss both the merits and demerits of using genetic engineering on plants, however, I agree that tampering with the biology is nothing to be afraid of.
There are many, like me, who support the invasion of science in agriculture. The top-notch concrete advantage of this is the higher growth rate of staple crops. A GM crop, named golden rice has threefold the production of rice and is fortified with enormous amount of minerals which can not only provide essential nutrition but also can save lives in drought and famine affected regions because it has the ability to grow in extreme conditions too. If these proliferation are not allowed then how authorities can satisfy the demand of food of growing population.
Despite this, it does have some disadvantages. Primarily, it has catastrophic impacts on environment and food chain as to produce tamper yields, chemicals are needed which have harmful effect when released in atmosphere. Moreover, use of hormones and antibiotics in cattle farming will have detrimental impact on food chain. Apart from this, many scientists link such crops with autism and allergies. Due to this, people have formed the opinion that these are not good for health. Consequently, such disadvantages can not be ignored.
In conclusion, genetic changes in crops has both positives and negatives which are discussed above. however, this is a field which lacks long-term research and more exploration in this field should be welcomed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, then, while, apart from, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24912280702 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78880936589 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638596491228 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5275473112 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238113410022 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680836105023 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439419600799 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125070859346 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227323086594 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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