Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Increase in garbage is becoming a major problem worldwide. To begin with the reasons of this alarming increase. I will share some of the major sources which contribute in this addition and also what should be the priorities of governments to overcome this problem.
It has been observed that most of the products are now coming in packaging made with plastic, paper or card. This trend has been adopted by most of the leading companies in order to provide facilities to their consumers. In most of the cases, material used for these packing are not environment friendly or degradable, hence, it is becoming one of the major reason for increase in garbage. For instance, if we had a juice packed in plastic bottle which is not degradable/re-usable, it will become a part of already existing heap and will harm the nature to its core.
In continuation to this, a large number of countries are lacking in technology which can help them in utilizing the rubbish in making alternate energy. It is another reason of enormously growing quantity of waste. We can clearly see that third world countries are majorly suffering from this issue. One can see stacks of trash pilling in every corner.
Governments are rigorously working to find out the ways to tackle this issue as it is dangerous for human health as well as our environment. First thing is to educate people on how to keep their surroundings clean by not littering around. In addition to this, governments should plant machinery to recycle this material and can convert it into energy for use.
To conclude, I must emphasis on the need of clean and clear environment. People must know through different education programs on how to handle this rubbish and also government should start working on emergency basis to cope up with this issue before it gets too late to handle.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, third, well, for instance, in addition, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85623003195 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76290782094 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575079872204 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8901225606 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5625 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152077615097 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470928400348 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036871585959 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0841630778609 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273897585848 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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