Eating too much sugar is harmful for health. Some people think that it is government responsibility to limit people’s sugar consumption, while others think that it is individuals responsibility to limit the amount of sugar they eat. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There is a well known saying that “excess of everything is Bad”. Sugar is also known as sweet poison in many countries because of harms associated with its excessive usage. Due to increasing damage of sugar, there are people who demand from government to ban or at least restrict the use of sugar while other still believe that it is responsibility of individuals to manage their intake. I shall discuss both the views before concluding.
Easiest way of stopping people from something is to impose ban on consumption or make its availability difficult. There is a group of people who have this point of view that government should intervene and take necessary steps to control people’s sugar usage. This can be achieved in many ways including educating people about the harms caused by excessive sugar consumption or by raising the prices or imposing taxes on purchase. If education serves the purpose, it is good for all else taxes will eventually impact on the purchase power and hance usage will be dropped.
On the contrary, there is a bunch of people who believes on self help. They emphasizes on self control instead of being guided by government authorities. Everyone is responsible for their doings and people are aware of the hazards caused by intense use of sugar, so their health is in their own hand. They have to work on limiting themselves on intake of sweet.
To summarize, I support the idea of second group as everything cannot be put on governments as individuals hold same level of responsibilities. Health is wealth and if we will not take good care of ourselves, no one will. Being mature people, it is our sheer responsibility to maintain our diet and make sure to not have anything which can risk our health and life in a longer run.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, still, well, while, at least, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83881578947 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83252336713 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565789473684 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0586100046 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2666666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46666666667 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312672769915 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906720337557 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673503078765 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179107698391 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0779569464862 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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