People sleep less than before in many countries. Why do people sleep less? What effect does it have on an individually and on society?
It is true that number of sleeping hours has been continuously reducing in numerous nations. There are various factors which lead to this problem of insomnia and it is going to have myriads of detrimental effect on both people and community.
The predominant reasons for this decrease in bedtime is lack of physical activities and work pressure. People these days are living sedentary life, they are spending whole day by doing the monotonous job and setting in the front of computers.In addition, all the household tasks are also easily done by machines, so unlike yesteryear masses are less involved in manual works. For example, washing clothes and utensils can be conveniently done on electronic devices. Moreover, young people also spend their leisure time on virtual devices, like on their smart phones, either they are busy in playing games on devices, or they are busy on social networking sites. Whereas in ancient era, children and teenagers both play outdoor games. If a person's body is tired than only, one can take the sound sleep and able to relax completely but, in present mind is more tired, while compared to body, which is leading to stress and ultimately causes to lack of sleep. In this competitive era every job is demanding and every person is working under pressure, which lead to tension and increased stress on mind.Therefore, less body movements and long working hours leads to sleeplessness among people.
The major repercussions of this decreased sleeping hours will be development of health problems and lack of social life. Lack of sound sleep causes negative effect on mind and body. If a person does not sleep properly, his body will not be able to rejuvenate and cells will not function properly. Concentration power will decrease, mood swing will be there and he will not be performance any task with whole mind and brain, which will lead to lower outcomes from any work which he perform. In long run this will hamper nations growth, because economy will stagnate if citizens will not perform their job well. Apart from this, person who sleep less, get irritated on minor things and issues, which will have adverse impact on his social life, because nobody likes to be around unhappy people. People who are no able to interact with the society, feel isolated and get on depression easily. This will also cause harm to be community around because world will be better place if people live in harmony and love. Hence, this change in sleeping patterns will have vital impact on both people and society.
In conclusion, health is the greatest wealth a person can have, due to change in the ways of life and demanding jobs, people are not able to sleep properly and undoubtedly it harming a lot and hampering the growth of the nation and its citizens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, apart from, for example, in addition, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 26.0 10.4138276553 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2319.0 1615.20841683 144% => OK
No of words: 472.0 315.596192385 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91313559322 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6610686524 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49365666803 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 176.041082164 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53813559322 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 718.2 506.74238477 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6511247697 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.052631579 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8421052632 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94736842105 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186798520791 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643410345755 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500623742051 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12484588737 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0119167145945 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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