It is irrefutable that death rate is deteriorating due to advancement in health sector. Some people arugue that this generates several problems while others disagree. This essay will analyse the issues occure because of old generation and how they play an imperative role in the society. In my opinion, having an old person in the society should be considered as a bliss.
To begin with, the major problem arises in the community is increase in unemployment rate which is also a burning question nowadays. They take away the job opportunities from freshers as they have more experience which is preferred by the employers. On top of it, they do not easily leave their position in the organisation, as a result, new comers do not get the opportunity to showcase their abilities. Hence, this is unfair for the immensly talented freshers to not get the breakthrough chance. Next, takind care of elderly increase the financial burden for the working group. Because of lack of time, people need to hire an external resource to take care of them. Thus, these two are the main problems occue due to having old people around.
On the other hand, sustained role of golden-ager is beneficial for us. First of all, for any organisation, they are the most crucial and critical resource because they have the knowledge of all the parts and know ins and outs of the process. Companies often provide different bonuses to these employees as they cannot afford to loose them. These people are helpful in imparting knowledge in less experienced employees. Second, old fogey fill the void behind the back of working parents. They share a magical and special bond with their grandchildren and teach them good religious and spiritual habits. It has been observed that children who spend time with their grandparents have more sense of securuty and understanding. Hence, elderly people have several things to offer to the society.
To summerize, although old people contribute in raising problems such as unemployment and financial burden on families, these problem can surely be overlooked as they can provide a better future to younger generations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 329, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[3]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...hese employees as they cannot afford to loose them. These people are helpful in impar...
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Line 7, column 121, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this problem' or 'these problems'?
Suggestion: this problem; these problems
...yment and financial burden on families, these problem can surely be overlooked as they can pr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, second, so, thus, while, such as, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1786.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07386363636 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76722045368 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571022727273 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2126942259 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174972877708 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529052790095 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558711411418 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11155640501 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480727621704 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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