Television Sporting shows such as the Olympics motivatethe youth who do not like to exercise much. Do you agree or disagree? Include relevant examples in your answer and provide your own opinion.
There is a view that the modern generation, who is leading a lethargic lifestyle, is being encouraged to work out by television sporting programs. In my opinion, although it is true that such shows can influence the youth to perform physical activities to a certain point, there are often limits to this approach.
To begin with, it important to acknowledge that famous athletes invigorate youth to stay fit. This is because as the young generation is highly impressionable and tends to follow the lifestyle of their most-liked players, they usually mimick their physical routine and perform the same exercises regularly. For instance, Virat Kohli, a notorious Indian cricket player, has inspired several youths by his six-pack physic, which is a result of rigorous gym exercises. Further, numerous young people prepare themselves to participate in future sports championship events. Thus, this passion for competition encourages them to be in continuous physical training and maintain a healthy lifestyle.
Nevertheless, It is also a fact that such sporting television programs lead to a sadistic way of living. The reason for this that people often spend long hours in front of a television watching these shows continuously rather than being physically active. For illustration, During the Olympic games, the people often stay glued to the television throughout all sports activities. Moreover, many youths use this as an accuse of spending a huge amount of time watching these games which is unhealthy for body and mind both.
In conclusion, while youngsters, these days, are being encouraged to lead an active lifestyle to be a part of the future championship events and, by following several athletes, there is often negative side as well, such as an addiction to television, which leads to an inactive way of living.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 416, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ties. Moreover, many youths use this as an accuse of spending a huge amount of time watch...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29896907216 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92733890574 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591065292096 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9152230774 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.5 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114761334599 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463520370232 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321041191108 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0739064696422 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446363906553 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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