The number of people who are at risk to health problems are increased due to overweight.
What is the reason of over weight?
How can this problem be avoided?
In this cutting edge era , The Chunk of society opines that obesity problem plays a pivotal role in creating health issues as well as danger for the people lives . The forthcoming paragraph will not only explain the issues but also suggest the measures to tackle it .
Adequate evidence has been collected to tackle this error. The top notch reason is due to the over consumption of junk food which prepare in less time we can say also " ready to eat meals". To be more precise , as people indulge in professional scenario, no one has much time to go to gym and do the exercises for hour .So, they more prefer these items. For instance, the survey conducted by United states census bureau in 2010 in us on 2000 men's ranging between 20-25 age groups which revealed that more than 87% are consuming street food . Hence, we can control this issue by encouraging them to have healthy diet and exercise.
Moreover, people are not aware about the daily routine they prefer these food to apatite their hunger. To explain it further, it not only cause diseases but also affect the body structure. To exemplify, the research done by Oxford university,uk on 2000 women in 2014, in uk showed that more than 95% are taking junk food .
As a result, it affect the appetite and it will be diminished by educational advertisement n boarding .
To sum up, I affirm that obesity creates the severe impact of health diseases it not only affect body but severely impact on mental status. it will be resolved by educating people's and make them aware.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, as a result, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73234200743 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47720918019 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620817843866 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1076499425 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9230769231 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138906198424 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436917841562 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414232843649 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0660028224368 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356372724513 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.