The number of traffic accidents is rising in many countries. Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the only way to reduce traffic accidents. Do you agree or disagree?
Today, a growing number of people rely too much on cars, which increases the incidence of traffic accidents. Some people claim that the only way to reduce road accidents is that giving harsh punishments to those who break traffic rules. In my perspective, I agree with this view.
one of the main reasons is that most of drivers do not regard breaking traffic rules as the crime. They also reckon that money can solve everything, even they violate traffic regulations. This reduces their awareness of traffic safety. In addition to that, the pace of life is increasing with the rapid development of science and technology. Citizens do everything quickly and do not want to spend too much time on the way, which leads to increasing the number of reckless drivers who are always driving fast and impatient. Furthermore, the government does not have an efficient traffic system to monitor every road, which let some traffic offenders think that they may not be caught by traffic police. As a consequence, the number of the traffic accidents is growing, and most of them lead to property loss and injuries, even deaths.
On the other hand, some individuals argue that there are still other methods to help drivers to obey traffic regulations. For example, installing speed cameras and red light cameras on every cross road can help drivers improve awareness of traffic rules. Moreover, the government can encourage media to provide real-time traffic information for drivers, which can help them to avoid the traffic congestion. Finally, the government can organise some traffic saftey activities to educate drivers about the traffic regulations. All the above can reduce the road accidents efficiently.
As far as I am concerned, I think strict punishment, such as pay heary fines or be sent into prison, is a good method to deter dangerous driving. Also, the government can do something else to help drivers observe traffic rules.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
...perspective, I agree with this view. one of the main reasons is that most of dri...
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Line 3, column 33, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the drivers') or simply say ''most drivers''.
Suggestion: most of the drivers; most drivers
...iew. one of the main reasons is that most of drivers do not regard breaking traffic rules as...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'finally', 'furthermore', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'still', 'for example', 'i think', 'in addition', 'such as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.287323943662 0.247107183377 116% => OK
Verbs: 0.171830985915 0.155533422707 110% => OK
Adjectives: 0.056338028169 0.0946595960268 60% => OK
Adverbs: 0.056338028169 0.0501214627716 112% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0281690140845 0.0437548338989 64% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0957746478873 0.122226691241 78% => OK
Participles: 0.0281690140845 0.0403226058552 70% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.67652924311 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0394366197183 0.0326793684256 121% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0929577464789 0.0861772015684 108% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0225352112676 0.021408717616 105% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0169014084507 0.011925033212 142% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1933.0 1933.35771543 100% => OK
No of words: 318.0 316.048096192 101% => OK
Chars per words: 6.0786163522 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.361635220126 0.374742101984 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.295597484277 0.28420135186 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.166666666667 0.203846283523 82% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.132075471698 0.137316102897 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67652924311 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.037074148 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553459119497 0.56093040696 99% => OK
Word variations: 58.958288263 60.7387585426 97% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.7058823529 20.7743622355 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7618342158 49.517814964 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.705882353 127.492653851 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7058823529 20.7743622355 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.764705882353 0.814263465372 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 48.2656307806 49.1944974215 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.6043956044 1.69124875643 95% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.492402279981 0.332605444948 148% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0857873025405 0.102741220458 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0753634801704 0.0668466124924 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.520057496825 0.534860350844 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.148681118392 0.148594505496 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184704598592 0.134430193775 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821764786291 0.0742795772207 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.372205988832 0.324371583561 115% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0925834158885 0.0638462369009 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.325565101279 0.228012699653 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103631453596 0.058150111329 178% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 5.90881763527 34% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.5751503006 272% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.