Obesity was once considered a disease of adults, however, it is becoming increasingly common among children. Why do you think this is happening? What can be dome to help children stay healthy?
Nowadays, children are also suffering from obesity for several reasons. Obesity among children should be taken into consideration by schools, parents, and government.
There are many reasons that children are getting more obese these days. Firstly, they spend more time watching television or playing video games that prevent them from physical activity. Secondly, fast food companies create attractive advertisements to promote and populate food items especially for kids, as a result, kids attract to eat those items which contain a high intake of sugar. Sugar-rich diet not only causes a significant weight gain but also contributes to another disease such as diabetes in the young population. Finally, working parents cannot find time to cook food at home so more often they also choose easy to ready food. This food has many preservatives and artificial ingredients to cause more damage to the health of the family.
To prevent children from this disease, everyone has to take a few steps from the beginning. At school, children should educated to find the difference between healthy and unhealthy food items. A good habit from the early stage of life makes a huge difference. Parents also should understand the risk of eating packaged food and sugary drinks. Those items should restricted from the daily routine. The government should offer healthy dietary guidance and promote a healthy eating habit campaign to educate people. Local community and health care can also help the government to promote and spread the message to the end person.
In conclusion, obesity can be avoided from the early stage of life if each and every child educate and aware of healthy eating.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, as to, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25555555556 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57034101808 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.060091658 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6875 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142729856255 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523150392287 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522974343601 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108368274133 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514864190196 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.