One of the result of revised medical concern is that community are living great and life tension is improving. This advancement has certanly increased the ratio of population from erlier time. In this situation, I sertainly belive that advanteges of this development are more than disadvanteges.
Fundamentally, the fast change in system and technology has improvided us with the vantage where people can live longer than in past. In fact, this has made the adults to stay motivated till they can provide to their outland. Directly, eldest people whose age about 70 may invest their labor in such professions as writer,lawmakers, scientist and more others. This can influence the fact that the elders will be aware of the news of the country and will be an example to their generation.
Furthermore, in this modern time grandparents are the one people who concerned for the offsprings as they only valid worker for upbringing except parents. Also, they play an important role in our life by helping with their advice and life experiences. For example , if older people are the best people who can help us with their knowledge about history.
In conclusion, the improved medical care and techology has made it available to have longer expectancy life. It is simply impossible to believe that they will be a burden for the country. I certainly believe, that this way they are equal contributors in the development of country working towards making a nation standing successful in all spheres.
- The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port city center from 2003 2012 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
- The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port city center from 2003 2012 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The chart below gives information about Southland s main exports in 2000 2018 and future projections for 2025 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- In the past when students did a university degree they tended to study in their own country Nowadays they have more opportunity to study abroad What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development 64
- One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: in the past
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Suggestion: , the eldest
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: , lawmakers
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Suggestion: ,
...advice and life experiences. For example , if older people are the best people who...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, for example, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10162601626 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87235479509 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59756097561 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.2270166065 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.5384615385 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9230769231 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225389514585 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079944463346 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699206094274 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136247020553 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416917272396 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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