One of the major problems that faces today’s governments is creating enough satisfactory housing for their increasing populations whilst still trying to protect the environment.
Discuss this statement and give your opinion.
The ever-growing population is a universal issue; as a result, governments across the world are struggling to meet the housing needs of their citizens. In my view, people should have options to choose their style of houses, but not at the cost of environmental destruction. this essay will discuss the exigency of this issue and plausible measures to tackle the dire straits.
To commence with, shelter is one of the basic needs of human beings, and
it cannot be compromised. governments across the world are exploring various
options to meet not only the accommodations of people but also
to provide them
with their suitable choice of stay. Not every individual has the same taste and economic standard; hence, it is
obvious for people to look for a home, based on their needs. For instance, a
high achiever would not like to stay in the small one-bedroom living room,
as he or she works hard to reach at this level and deserve a better lifestyle.
this is how social structure can be maintained and
people will aspire to be successful in
order to better their living standards. On the flip side, building more houses
as per people's needs, often come at the cost of deforestation, which directly
affects the biodiversity of this world. Whilst,
the real estate agencies are tirelessly building sprawling residences, they
tend to ignore the environmental damage, and keep cutting woods deliberately.
this is a pertinent issue and the government needs to strike a balance between
needs to build residences for it’s' citizens and at the same time, keep the
environment green and healthy.
Furthermore, leaders are not at the loss of options to tackle this immediate issue, there are some plausible remedies, which which " style="white-space: pre-wrap; cursor: default;">can be looked at. one of
the solutions could be, building apartments vertically than horizontally. this
way plenty of space can be saved without
compromising on the quality of housing. To
illustrate, if one 2 bedroom house requires 800 square feet of area, then 10
houses would need 8000 square feet at least. In contrast if the apartments apartments " style="white-space: pre-wrap; cursor: default;">are built vertically as a 10 10 " style="white-space: pre-wrap; cursor: default;">storey building, only 800 square feet of the surface area area " style="white-space: pre-wrap; cursor: default;">are required. In addition, Colonies can be built in the barren lands, which will save our green
jungles. These uncultivated areas are a good option for building skyscrapers,
which will be a perfect solution to build an appropriate abode for people. For example, The Gujrat government in India built a whole new city in the “Kachh” desert.
this kind of farsightedness of state government shows how to satisfy the
shelter need for the citizen.
In conclusion, the need for affordable and suitable accommodation will only increase in the future. hence, leaders leaders " style="white-space: pre-wrap; cursor: default;">should be proactive and work
with their bureaucrats to be ready with
options, and they should not ignore the environmental environmental " style="white-space: pre-wrap; cursor: default;">well being. human beings can only prosper if they respect nature and
co-exist together.
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- One of the major problems that faces today s governments is creating enough satisfactory housing for their increasing populations whilst still trying to protect the environment Discuss this statement and give your opinion 73
- One of the major problems that faces today s governments is creating enough satisfactory housing for their increasing populations whilst still trying to protect the environment Discuss this statement and give your opinion 73
- One of the major problems that faces today s governments is creating enough satisfactory housing for their increasing populations whilst still trying to protect the environment Discuss this statement and give your opinion 56
- One of the major problems that faces today s governments is creating enough satisfactory housing for their increasing populations whilst still trying to protect the environment Discuss this statement and give your opinion 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, look, so, then, well, at least, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2904.0 1615.20841683 180% => OK
No of words: 515.0 315.596192385 163% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63883495146 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.763781212 4.20363070211 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.78262195604 2.80592935109 135% => OK
Unique words: 264.0 176.041082164 150% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512621359223 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 841.5 506.74238477 166% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.8508367693 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.260869565 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3913043478 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26086956522 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 31.0 4.38176352705 707% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123258678733 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484816895375 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325859050954 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0407986346549 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358983037589 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 78.4519038076 161% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.