Organising a large family celebration such as a wedding can often create problems. What can be the problems associated with organising a large family event and what solutions can you suggest
One of the most typical issues in modern society is that the celebration organizing in a large family can often create problems. This has become a major problem for municipalities and dwellers. In this essay I will outline what can be the problems associated with organizing celebration and offer some measures to tackle this issue.
Generally speaking, there are two main cause of this phenomenon. Firstly, the budget will always be a challenge in organizing a ceremony. Therefore, finding the balance between what you want, and what your budget can be is more stressful than fun. Working within a fixed budget is crucial when organizing an event. Because, each cost of item for an ceremony can have numerous configurations and choices. Therefore, to tackle with this problem a careful and complete list of exact requirements and its cost, is needed.
Another cause of this issue is finding the right date and time. Whether to do the ceremony during a peak season or low season, ensuring that the attendance of all family members on the selected date is very crucial. It is a well-known fact that providing an invite list in which, is determined who is invited for the ceremony can be an arduous task. A potential solution to solve this problem is that it is necessary to collect the requirement information from the whole family at least one year ago.
In conclusion, it must be said that arranging a ceremony has become a complex issue with no easy solution. However, I believe that if family gather in a mutually respectful, safe and joyful way, the time together can create a great deal of satisfaction that reduce the hardness of arranging.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 347, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...n event. Because, each cost of item for an ceremony can have numerous configuratio...
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Line 5, column 259, Rule ID: AN_INVITE[1]
Message: Use only in informal register. In other registers, 'invitation' should be used.
Suggestion: invitation
... is a well-known fact that providing an invite list in which, is determined who is inv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, well, at least, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92142857143 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77962704883 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578571428571 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1444028982 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8666666667 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324329101274 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919409056668 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829798456983 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193123882408 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0928947261959 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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