Overfishing of the world’s oceans threatens many species with extinction and is putting the livelihood of millions of people around the world at risk. What are the causes of this problem and what can be done to prevent it from happening?
excessive fishing has been a controversial topic for decades since it is not only a reason for the extinction of a great number of marine species but it also threatens the livelihood of human beings. this problem is caused by several factors, and it should be tackled by both government and individuals which will be outlined carefully in this essay.
there are some primary reasons why people catch fish excessively. one of the first reason is that fishery could bring traders a lump sum of money as there are more and more demands for ocean products, especially from wealthy families. As a matter of fact, farmed goods are no longer trusted by consumers because they are characterized as humble products which have been processed with poisonous chemicals to achieve appealing appearance. Customers, therefore, are in favor of plates of seafood as they are believed to be less harmful to human's health, and this fact encourages fishman to implement huge catches illegally. Another reason worth mentioning is that advanced technology has made fishing become more effortlessly than it was ever before. Take mined fishing as an example of a farming breakthrough since this method is unprecedented in history; however, this causes a great number of aquatic lives to suffer from the possibility of extinction.
Fortunately, some measures can be taken into account to avoid this issue. The first solution is that the government should impose high taxes on the prices of the ocean's products, which could shrink the demand in consuming those natural resources. As a result, the more people lack interests in dining seafood, the more fish can be saved. In addition, individuals should hold accountable for reducing the number of marine products that they purchase. it is possible to achieve sustainable development in the long run by raising public awareness in alleviating environmental problems.
In conclusion, overfishing is one of the most noticeable issues which requires both government and individuals concerns. this problem occurred for many reasons and indicated solutions should be produced soon to tackle this matter
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27728613569 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86839447178 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589970501475 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9565716368 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.266666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158922480693 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511092929886 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042489915099 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106641310759 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307347365444 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.