Overpopulation is very evident in the world today, even the developed and modern countries are affected by this. This essay will talk about some of the problems that overpopulation causes as well as possible measures to this global problem.
One of the main problem caused by increase in population would be lack of job or employment problems. Millions of people would want to have a stable job position in a well developed country, but not all would have that privileged. Employment is one of the basic human needs and a lack of it could cause a series of negative events. For instance, people could go for desperate measures like robbing a bank or worse increase in crime rates. Another issue would be road congestion as more and more people are invading the city areas. For example, most people would use private transportation everyday to and from work, this would result in too many people on the road.
A possible solution to this problem would be offering job opportunities for the people in rural areas. Building malls or commercial spaces in these places would mean job placement for people. Furthermore crime rates would further be decreased as people have their source of income. And eventually less people would be seen on main roads due to decrease people.
To sum up, although it is an obvious that a number of issues would arise due to increase in population, solutions to this problem is still attainable and should take into action by the leader of the country. Individuals and government can work together to further halt the increase in population.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Furthermore,
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, so, still, well, for example, for instance, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9063670412 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68570404441 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561797752809 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2231108806 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5714285714 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162960435556 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581628146415 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0870694586307 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119572478429 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0836903287876 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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