In the past knowledge was contained in books. Nowadays, knowledge is uploaded to the internet.
Presently Internet has made knowledge a lot easy for a lot of people. In the world currently,information can be passed easily from one person to the other.
People are always informed, due to the high level of knowledge passed through the internet on a daily basics. With the help of internet people are able to send knowledgeable informations to their loved ones through internet. People get easily enlightened and satisfied on the knowledgeable facts, they get through the internet and on any topic of their choice at anytime.
However, in the past people wait till they go to the book shops before they can gain knowledge, therefore making assignments and projects writing slow and stressful in most cases. In the past people take a lot of time to complete a project writing, because of the tremendous time it take to gather the materials(book) needed. Most times these materials are gotten from different writers and book shops.
Due to the process in knowledge in the past, most people lose interest in reading but with the help of internet uploads, people tend to read more and gather lots of knowledge at their comfort homes.
- You would like your child to have a day off from school for a special family celebration Write a letter to the principal and in your letter Describe the family celebration Say why it s important for your child to be there Explain how your child will catch 73
- You would like your child to have a day off from school for a special family celebration Write a letter to the principal and in your letter Describe the family celebration Say why it s important for your child to be there Explain how your child will catch 87
- In the past knowledge was contained in books Nowadays knowledge is uploaded to the internet Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 56
- You would like your child to have a day off from school for a special family celebration Write a letter to the principal and in your letter Describe the family celebration Say why it s important for your child to be there Explain how your child will catch 73
- You are going to throw a party and would like to cook a special dish for your guests but do not have the recipe Write a letter to your friend In your letter tell your friend why you are having a party explain what dish you want to cook and ask your friend 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 93, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , information
... a lot of people. In the world currently,information can be passed easily from one person to...
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Line 6, column 280, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... writing, because of the tremendous time it take to gather the materialsbook need...
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Line 6, column 285, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'takes'?
Suggestion: takes
...ing, because of the tremendous time it take to gather the materialsbook needed. Mos...
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Line 6, column 390, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ls are gotten from different writers and book shops. Due to the process in kno...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1034.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 207.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99516908213 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85499480836 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541062801932 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0236913548 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8181818182 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2803427849 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141696742958 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12456019873 0.0667982634062 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202617962867 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.165545233207 0.056905535591 291% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.