Paying all workers, the same salary in company promotes harmony and peace among colleagues. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people contemplate that in the organisations, the employess can take certain measures to mainatin harmonious environemnt at workplace such as paying all the employees same salary regardless of their position in company. I personally disagree to given statement because same salary is not only factor which will contribute to maintain positive relationship among employees there are some other factors as well.
To begin with, if all the workers are paid same salary irrespective of their job roles and responsibilities it will leave impression on their mind that their skills are underrated and are not paid what they deserve. As a consequence, such employees will not be able to show professionalism in terms of behavior with other employees who are not having same job responsibilities but still are getting more than they deserve and it will create sense of hatred among them.
Moreover, the employer should lay emphasis on the preliminary causes of not having harmonious environment at workplace. Some workers are not satisfied with their jobs and hence not capable of performing well in their job. In such scenarios, they feel stressed and not treat their subordinates with respect which results into disputes. In order to avoid that, boss ought to focus on well being of employees because if they enjoy their job, will focus on work and will be happy and make everyone in their surrounding feels same positive vibe.
To conclude, an employer should look into deep what is required to maintian positive environment at workplace because money is not the only solution to all problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 339, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...factor which will contribute to maintain positive relationship among employees th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, moreover, so, still, well, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17374517375 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89568597091 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552123552124 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.3472804526 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.888888889 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7777777778 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143538564723 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633976451487 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475047647925 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0946567334438 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052660200398 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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