Some believe that more action should be taken to prevent crime, while others feel that crime is being tackled effectively now.
Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
Some people have opinion that these days crime rate has reduced and has taken care off while others contemplate that more preventive measures are required to curb that issue. According to my perspective, it has not been addressed properly and more actions should be taken to mitigate that issue.
The first point to consider is that legislation must have speedy process of hearing so that the accussed must be charged for his unlawful act to create sense of fear among others. The government pass some laws, regulations and decide what punishment can be given for anti social activity but the whole judicial process is very long and in most of the cases took ages to put the offender behind the bars. Meanwhile the victim feel that he is not getting justice, in fact, some individuals prefer not to go to police and took revenge by themselves which led to another crime again.
On the other hand, there are some issues which have been dealt to some extent such as burgulary, snatching etcetra. In most of the nations, they have provided emergency helpline number where they can inform police if they report any criminal activity in their vicinty. The police officilas are on surveillance to keep an eye on surroundings and the minute they report any issue, they took action immidietaly and provides safe environment for citizens.
To sum up what have discussed so far, no doubt government is addressing all the crimes attentively and ensure its citizens that they have can have faith in law but it should focus on preventive and reformative actions which can make a pause on unlawfull activities and maintain harmony.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 37, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
Some people have opinion that these days crime rate has reduced and has taken ca...
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Line 3, column 405, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
...es to put the offender behind the bars. Meanwhile the victim feel that he is not getting ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, while, in fact, no doubt, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90909090909 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53738982173 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614545454545 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.1462920747 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.0 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5555555556 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.22222222222 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213687603488 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901095722374 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723071986243 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137858659737 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0995520741142 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.