People across the world are more similar than they are different. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Our mother earth is home to culturally and ethnically diverse human species, but we are separated by boundaries and religions and only united by humanity. Nowadays, there is a contentious argument all over, whether we human beings have more similarity than differences that divides us? I agree that the similarities outweigh the differences separating us.
Beyond any doubt, there are myriads of logical reasons that prove that our global community is identical. As humans, we all need love, hope, compassion, dreams, confidence and support to survive on this planet. Our deep desires for care, humbleness and social approval is what unites us. When two souls connect on a cognitive level, their intellectual frequencies make them hold hands together, filtering racial and cultural differences out of the window. For example, there are millions of couples around the world who desire that their soul mate should be from a different culture and ethnicity. It indicates that we are more similar than the boundaries that divide us.
On the contrary, some people believe that cultural differences and race for superiority causes a shift in personality type. This shift leads to a regional divide casting out few ethnicities as extremists. For example, the terrorist attacks orchestrated by few terrorists, on 9th September 2011 on the Twin Towers, Newyork, America, thousands of innocents got killed for no apparent reason. However, I believe that humanity always wins in the end. Would it be right to blame a whole community for the deeds of a small minority group? This notion stands void.
In conclusion, I believe that sometimes uneducated people from some cultural groups try to spread hatred by involving terrorism. However, I strongly agree that most people are alike in terms of emotional bonding and moral values.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, for example, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28178694158 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7936855112 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635738831615 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8889964979 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4117647059 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1176470588 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.82352941176 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15884398913 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515866459369 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649173419048 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095510067304 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454416956157 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.