Nowadays, we live in a technological era.So more increasing to digital world as well as advertising world is the increasing day by day. But many person ponder that advertising is a very effect on our lives is ubiquitous, across the globe due to it's paramount importanant .In my opinion I think this topic has aserveral positive effects of this outweigh the negative effects. which will be elaborated in upcoming paragraph.
To begin with the, there are many merits for people use of advertisement. Out of all the, one to prove strongest my point that, advertisement is a very helpful in all individual life.To explain the all masses can promotion in thier business by advertising,hence person attract to their company is as well as the to be able to earn more money in their life. For instance, many human don't know about Dominos company in beginning , when they do advertisement of their companies and now all people know about Dominos, so advertisement key part of the business. Apart from the, people can know new feature of products through a commercial merchandise,that means, if launch any products ,so can easily know to it feature.This fact is a logical.
On the contrary, the counter claim the mention support. The formost arguments they do that, people think that advertisement more impact on our life, because advertisement do attrect to people on unnecessary things, so people buy that item ,nevertheless ,that product have more expensive. Moreover, people are deceived by advertising, that means what is shown in the advertisement is not in the original.
To conclude, without any doubt, this is a mixed bag. If this topic has a many positive as compared to the negative point of notion any may not be underestimated and I would like to say advertising not effect on our life because it's helpful in many ways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, apart from, for instance, i think, as well as, in my opinion, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96416938111 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06289828868 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560260586319 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.7377856489 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5833333333 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.25 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317464075086 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0997414817388 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109173793913 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203328714079 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116381194256 0.056905535591 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.